Writing problems
Different POV characters know different pieces of the story
A scene works from one perspective but gives another narrator information they do not share. You may be carrying the combined picture instead of each person's partial one.
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Character knowledge timeline
Review one character’s knowledge timeline, then repeat for the other viewpoints involved.
Choose a character and follow their recorded learning, suspicion and misunderstanding through linked scenes.
Look for Who has each piece, who only suspects it and which scene changes that position.
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Why this happens
Multiple viewpoints create overlapping information sets. Reader knowledge, narrator knowledge and character knowledge can differ deliberately, particularly around suspense and dramatic irony.
A reader may recognise the significance of a conversation that its participants misunderstand. Preserve that distinction instead of making dialogue explain information solely because the reader already possesses it.
What to look for
- Compare what each viewpoint can know at the same moment
- Mark reader-only information
- Check dialogue that silently assumes a shared discovery