Writing problems
You're not sure what some scenes are contributing
You can describe what happens in a scene but struggle to explain why it belongs in this particular book. Its dialogue or atmosphere may be enjoyable while its contribution remains uncertain.
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Timeline · scenes and chapters
Scene summaries and purpose labels let you compare a passage with the scenes that depend on it.
See scenes grouped under chapters in manuscript order, with their summaries, purposes and linked story elements available for inspection.
Look for A change, decision, discovery or later consequence that would be lost without the scene.
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Why this happens
A scene's work can be quiet: establishing an expectation, changing a relationship or giving meaning to a later choice. Difficulty naming that work is a reason to inspect it, not proof that it should go.
A reflective scene might make a later refusal understandable without advancing an external objective. Identify that contribution before deciding that a lack of overt action makes the scene expendable.
What to look for
- Describe what is different after the scene
- Identify a later moment that depends on it
- Try stating what the reader would lose if it vanished